Before I could even know,
Your care and concern blew away my mind.
Before I could even sense,
I was caught right in your bind.
Before I could catch my breath,
Your persona held it for more than a while.
Before I could even know,
Something took me to sublime.
Before I could even feel,
I kept doting you in my thoughts.
Before I could even permit,
I lost control to my zenith.
Before I could even judge,
I already had my credence in you.
Before I could even feel,
I lost myself to you.
Before I could even resonate,
I was already set to reverie by your smile.
Before I could even connect,
I had my soul searching for you.
Before I could even abandon,
Your name was felt reverberating by.
Before I could even resonate,
You made my lifetime through;
A golden string in my dainty blue.
-Phalguni Bose
So...this one was again nice...the poem had a rhythm..n the most beautiful part waz
ReplyDeleteBefore I could even feel,
I lost myself to you.
just felt the intensity...still i feel the poem wasnot up to ur grades...tthough poems hv no grades...they r jst feelins in the form of wrds..which is always beautiful....keep it up
I always try my best to portray my feelings and thoughts into words as aptly as possible but not all days are the same n neither all scenarios too, just that. Thnks for ur comment! :)
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